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Posted by tristan.p756 on December 18, 2015 at 10:25 AM Comments comments (0)

HA PPY BIRTHDAY

today is a special day

slip on your birthday suit and yell hooray

open up your presents

happy birthday you big boy

the big five its old enough to drive

the oh boy it's a bike

let's ride to the lake

crap i have a belly ache

from all the chocolate cake

poems

Posted by tristan.p756 on December 18, 2015 at 10:20 AM Comments comments (0)

(ryme to tic tok kesha)

about Christmas

wake up in the morning feeling like mcdonald

slip your slippers on and run out the door

yea i'm talking presents on the floor floor

santa at the door door

yea lets yell some more

dont stop rip it upthe party ant stopping now

go ohohoho

go ohohoho

tonight imma fight till i win my purple kite

ohohohoho

ohohohoho

like yea i got a bike

the space flyer

Posted by tristan.p756 on November 17, 2015 at 10:00 AM Comments comments (0)


 

“boom”

“captain we lost another ship”.

“Get the glorg zapper ready”

“but capta…..”

“JUST DO IT!”

“Ok but I will regret it.”

Did you get it ready?

Cause there coming towards our ship almost done a little time. ok i can really use it now those stupid glorgs are coming.

“I got it.“

Here gose nothin 3….2….1 bang.

After that big bang there was a big flash of light that could have blinded them

later that day captain sam woke up barely knowing how to walk after that he was immediately sent to the hospital and was badly hurt and was put on this medication that made him pass out.

 

Beep beep beep beep beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep and sadly he was gone they gave him a cremation and his son kevin was the captain of the space flyer his son continued the fight with the glorgs soon after the fight began (again) the glorgs captain surrendered. With their underwear on flagpoles and after that kevin was scared for life and he never talked about it ever again. He saw something he didn't want to see. Later that night he went to bed and in his dreams he saw the glorgs with their underwear and woke up breathing hard like it was a nightmare. Boom a big bomb hit his house woah he said as he woke up at seven in the morning. Wew he thought as he got up to change out of his wet pants. He went down stairs and to his surprise his wife was making pancakes he looked over and his wife handed him his pancakes and he went to work.

 

 

It was now eight in the morning he went to a hovering taxi and flew to the moon to shovel alien poop and that's when he saw something shiny and he looked at it was a map of the planets they were all crossed off except for earth and he discovered that he had to go to war he got into the space flyer and grabbed his men and went to war when he saw the aliens come out of the spaceship he burst out laughing they were little green men with big heads they sounded like they were sucking helium before they came

 

 

 

 

 

the aliens and the space crew started fighting on who was funny looking then they got ray guns and ugly detectors and just to kevin’s surprise they surrendered with their underwear

and kevin had it he went home wanting to die and later that night the big headed aliens came and killed him and they also cremated him and the aliens took over the world and lived happily ever after.

the magic sword

Posted by tristan.p756 on October 20, 2015 at 10:40 AM Comments comments (0)

Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period: 1

Date: 9/4/15

 

Crack!

“Awww, look at him he is so cute! Mom, the griffins are hatched! I will name him Ssam.”

Jack jumped out of his tree house.,

“Tthey're hatched, they're hatched!” he yelled running around his village. WAM!

“Ouch who are you?” says jack’’

“Ii'm Ppeater, who are you?”

“I’m jack. Hhere, Ii will help you up. Cc'mon, grab my hand Ii won’t bite. Hey do you want to ride on a griffin it will be fun.”

Fwoosh woh slow down you're going to aaahhhhh help. I got you i will just flip a u turn pull over immediately. Son you were under age driving. Sorry officer.You also fliped a u turn on a griffin you are going to jail bub.Mean while in peters head ,ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, there is a boy falling from the sky ,hey you can we borrow your blanket. yea why no time everybody grab a end and pull tight , i think we got him. BLAM ouch what gives ma'am said peter.

As the years went by Ppeter and Jjack became friends then when they got older happiness was gone peter moved to the usa and jack was a noble knight kicking serious butt Hhe hadwas just finished kissing the dragon good night, he cut its head clean off he took its horns and wings, he went home and went to bed and soon he was fast asleep ………...

“HELP me someone, please,” he woke up, not realizing he is in pjs, grabbed his sword and went to see what was wrong. ,hHe walked around the village then he saw in the fog a shadow and it was the princess jack ran over but the kidnapper disappeared jack ran to his treehouse and went to sleep he had a long day ahead of him. He woke up the next morning and saw a weird book sitting on the ground it wasn't a book it was a map .It was to find the princess

He packed up to go find her he got his stuff and got on sam go sam go off they went. he traveled for nights and days. He fell asleep for a few minutes when he woke he saw that he was standing right next to a sleeping cyclops he saw something glimmering the cave. He walked in and the cyclops woke oh crud he said to himself he reached down to get his sword it wasn't there so he pointed out his hand and nothing happend then the cyclops had him in his hand he pointed his hand out once more fire spewed out then he beat the crud out of the cyclops.then he heard a familiar sound he saw it was peter. They went to get on sam but he wasn't there they couldn't find him they got on peters griffin named jim and went off to find him. They saw something flying towards him they thought it was sam they flew closer and it was a pterodactyl they ran for their lives and they saw sam he was on a tree .Jack jumped off the griffin and landed on him. Sam flew away from the pterodactyl hopefully they won't find us says jack.. so where are we going jack says. to save the princess says jack. and they were off .

 

 

they were almost there by the next hour they arrived at a dark cave it was full of gold they saw a big bird cage for she was trapped in it they tried to open it but it wouldn't budge . soon they fell asleep trying to open the cage they woke with a singe of fire in their butts ouch why did you do that? to wake you up who was that they turned around and there was a dragon it was what kidnapped her. let the princess go says jack the dragon said if he went back to the cyclops cave and bring him back the sword with a dragon's egg in the bottom jack had used it to kill the cyclops jack told the dragon the story about the cyclops and the sword. he gave the dragon the sword and out hatched a baby dragon out of the handle and they flew back in the dark peter was talking to jack how did you defeat the cyclops ? he picked me up and i shot fire at him .you can do that? i guess

later that night they heard a weird sound they woke and nothing was there then there was a giant jack pointed his hand balm a big fist came out of his hand and slapped the giant silly he traveled for days then weeks then he finally arrived with the princess they congratulated them jack told the king about his power the king opened up his shirt and saw the scar of duse. it is him the king said. they through a big party for jack and he kissed the princess.

the night of halloween

Posted by tristan.p756 on October 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM Comments comments (0)

Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period:1

Date: 10/13/15

the night of halloween

 

 

 

Ding dong rang the doorbell who could this be at 12:00pm keven thought as he opened it. Trick or Treat . He forgot it was halloween.The night ended around 1:00 pm. His wife went to get in the shower. 4 minutes later he heard the shower start while the water was running he heard the back door slam.He was confused because his wife was in the shower. He heard the water shut off and his wife screamed.Kevin ran up and he couldn't find her. He laid on the bed and started crying but then he felt a drop of something on his forehead and looked up and his wife was stuck to the ceiling and was dead. Then all of a sudden the house was caught on fire he ran out and called the firemen and moved far away from that house he moved to africa .It was like 9 years before he fell in love. Her name was Veronica he loved her so much but on the same night of halloween he almost lost her but he was there to save her. She went down to watch tv and he came down and he saw a man sneaking up to her. He ran and beat him silly.Two years later a little girl was born he knew right that second that man will be back.

he thought about this and was scared.The next day Kevin took brianna to the park it was her first time and she loved it.He turned around and he saw a man he had the same scar on his left shoulder.Kevin ran for it he didn’t know what will happen and didn’t want to know.it was a while till he got home he locked the doors and windows. He wasn’t about to lose his daughter. so he got ready and called the police and heard banging on the door. Kevin thought it was the murderer but it was the police. Kevin knew it was the police after they kicked his door down.

 

it had been a long time since the murderer came back when briana was 8 years old she was playing at the park when kevin looked at his phone to see the time he looked up and she was gone. He couldn't find her anywhere so he called the police they searched everywhere.

 

It had been 3 years since he has seen her and he was so sad. one day he saw a familiar person walking into a house and they had a bag shaped like a body and it was wiggling.So he called the police he thinks he might get to see his daughter. so he went in with the police and hers banging up stairs so they checked and no one was there so they checked the attic and once he got up there he saw his daughter and she recognized him right as he came in . they were so happy. They set everyone free he went home and hid his daughter to surprise his wife he waited and waited but she wouldn't come.

 

mabey she was already home he looked up stairs to see if she was sleeping

she wasn't there so he called the police and they found her and caught the bad guy or should i say his old wife she didn't die after all she was alive all this time and he talked to her and she was mad at him for not wanting a baby. his old wife was put in jail and they were ok . The other night they went to sleep and early in the morning he heard a door slam. oh great he murmured to himself as he called the police…

 

 

 

THE END

the kidnapper

Posted by tristan.p756 on October 7, 2015 at 10:10 AM Comments comments (0)

Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period:1

Date: 9/22/15

 

 

 

The Kidnapper

 

 

 

 

BOOM! As the building next to me fell 3 people were saved 93 died, but who caught it on fire. It was too dangerous to sleep. It was 5 in the morning when another building caught on fire everyone was saved thanks to the fire men. Jack went to investigate he found a match that was already lit he picked it up and put it in a plastic bag for clues, he also found a shoe, he looked at the people that were trapped in the building and they had all their shoes so it was the criminals it is size 9. They now know that it is a 6ft. tall male with black hair and size 9 in mens shoes. They talked to the people that were trapped in the building, they checked for fingerprints and there were some on the match, it was Brian, Jack's best friend. He thought about it on the way over, they kicked the door down and he wasn't there. They checked every where, they couldn't find him. Jack went back and went to do research .

 

He found out that he likes arcades and bowling alleys and fun places, he checked at Nickel Mania he was not there . They checked everywhere. That night he woke up and his kid James was gone and his house was on fire! He didn't know what to do so he ran out to see what was happening and saw foot prints going east, so he followed them then they disappeared so he went back. He searched for days and there was no sign of him

one day he saw more footprints and followed them they led to dead man's cave, he walked in and saw his son tied up! James started to go crazy he looked behind him and it was his wife Lindsey She was the kidnapper but why did we get Brian's fingerprints maybe he burnt down the house and she kidnapped them.

He arrested lindsey and went to find Brian. He checked everywhere but could not find him. They looked everywhere for 3 years, checked and checked no one. They checked his house every day .One day he saw a new marking on the map and it said next week this house is getting burnt. He sat for days exhausted but he kept looking, he waited for a while. Finally that night came he went to the house.

While he was waiting he thought it could be a trap so he hid in the bushes.

He waited about an hour then he came, he jumped out and sure enough it was a trap he got kidnapped and tied up and beat until he died! He struggled to get out but he couldn't.

He saw his son with a pipe, and hit the snot out of Brian, he got put in jail with Lindsay but she was not there!

“How is this happening” he said, he went to find him but forgot to lock the door so brian got out and they were out of jail.

 

They were both loose! Jack was going to find her but Brian passed him and he

wanted to cry, it was hard to catch him.

He chased after them then he saw Lindsay come out from the bushes,

he went to get them and they ran into dead man’s cave, he got them but needed backup so he called, it took them a while to get there.

 

He waited and waited, he began to give up but then he saw them come and take

them back. He got in the car and drove off to go to bed, he drove for a while until he got back.

 

“When will we get there asked Brian,

Lindsay choked on something, so he pulled over and Lindsay had a razor blade in her mouth!

So they got back,put her in her cell,locked it this time

and went to bed. He had a dream, that night they got away again so he woke up and they were still there .

 

 

 

He went home to get ready but his son wanted him to play ball so he went to work to return his badge. He went home and had so much fun up until Jack's funeral. James was so butt hurt and wouldn't do anything like play ball with his friend so he was so sad he committed suicide,and they threw a funeral and wished that James will have a better home up there, and sent him out on the water and watched as he floated away.


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