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Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period:1

Date: 9/22/15

The Kidnapper

BOOM! As the building next to me fell 3 people were saved 93 died, but who caught it on fire. It was too dangerous to sleep. It was 5 in the morning when another building caught on fire everyone was saved thanks to the fire men. Jack went to investigate he found a match that was already lit he picked it up and put it in a plastic bag for clues, he also found a shoe, he looked at the people that were trapped in the building and they had all their shoes so it was the criminals it is size 9. They now know that it is a 6ft. tall male with black hair and size 9 in mens shoes. They talked to the people that were trapped in the building, they checked for fingerprints and there were some on the match, it was Brian, Jack's best friend. He thought about it on the way over, they kicked the door down and he wasn't there. They checked every where, they couldn't find him. Jack went back and went to do research .

He found out that he likes arcades and bowling alleys and fun places, he checked at Nickel Mania he was not there . They checked everywhere. That night he woke up and his kid James was gone and his house was on fire! He didn't know what to do so he ran out to see what was happening and saw foot prints going east, so he followed them then they disappeared so he went back. He searched for days and there was no sign of him

one day he saw more footprints and followed them they led to dead man's cave, he walked in and saw his son tied up! James started to go crazy he looked behind him and it was his wife Lindsey She was the kidnapper but why did we get Brian's fingerprints maybe he burnt down the house and she kidnapped them.

He arrested lindsey and went to find Brian. He checked everywhere but could not find him. They looked everywhere for 3 years, checked and checked no one. They checked his house every day .One day he saw a new marking on the map and it said next week this house is getting burnt. He sat for days exhausted but he kept looking, he waited for a while. Finally that night came he went to the house.

While he was waiting he thought it could be a trap so he hid in the bushes.

He waited about an hour then he came, he jumped out and sure enough it was a trap he got kidnapped and tied up and beat until he died! He struggled to get out but he couldn't.

He saw his son with a pipe, and hit the snot out of Brian, he got put in jail with Lindsay but she was not there!

“How is this happening” he said, he went to find him but forgot to lock the door so brian got out and they were out of jail.

They were both loose! Jack was going to find her but Brian passed him and he

wanted to cry, it was hard to catch him.

He chased after them then he saw Lindsay come out from the bushes,

he went to get them and they ran into dead man’s cave, he got them but needed backup so he called, it took them a while to get there.

He waited and waited, he began to give up but then he saw them come and take

them back. He got in the car and drove off to go to bed, he drove for a while until he got back.

“When will we get there asked Brian,

Lindsay choked on something, so he pulled over and Lindsay had a razor blade in her mouth!

So they got back,put her in her cell,locked it this time

and went to bed. He had a dream, that night they got away again so he woke up and they were still there .

He went home to get ready but his son wanted him to play ball so he went to work to return his badge. He went home and had so much fun up until Jack's funeral. James was so butt hurt and wouldn't do anything like play ball with his friend so he was so sad he committed suicide,and they threw a funeral and wished that James will have a better home up there, and sent him out on the water and watched as he floated away.