tristans peterson's writing 

Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period:1

Date: 10/13/15

the night of halloween

Ding dong rang the doorbell who could this be at 12:00pm keven thought as he opened it. Trick or Treat . He forgot it was halloween.The night ended around 1:00 pm. His wife went to get in the shower. 4 minutes later he heard the shower start while the water was running he heard the back door slam.He was confused because his wife was in the shower. He heard the water shut off and his wife screamed.Kevin ran up and he couldn't find her. He laid on the bed and started crying but then he felt a drop of something on his forehead and looked up and his wife was stuck to the ceiling and was dead. Then all of a sudden the house was caught on fire he ran out and called the firemen and moved far away from that house he moved to africa .It was like 9 years before he fell in love. Her name was Veronica he loved her so much but on the same night of halloween he almost lost her but he was there to save her. She went down to watch tv and he came down and he saw a man sneaking up to her. He ran and beat him silly.Two years later a little girl was born he knew right that second that man will be back.

he thought about this and was scared.The next day Kevin took brianna to the park it was her first time and she loved it.He turned around and he saw a man he had the same scar on his left shoulder.Kevin ran for it he didn’t know what will happen and didn’t want to know.it was a while till he got home he locked the doors and windows. He wasn’t about to lose his daughter. so he got ready and called the police and heard banging on the door. Kevin thought it was the murderer but it was the police. Kevin knew it was the police after they kicked his door down.

it had been a long time since the murderer came back when briana was 8 years old she was playing at the park when kevin looked at his phone to see the time he looked up and she was gone. He couldn't find her anywhere so he called the police they searched everywhere.

It had been 3 years since he has seen her and he was so sad. one day he saw a familiar person walking into a house and they had a bag shaped like a body and it was wiggling.So he called the police he thinks he might get to see his daughter. so he went in with the police and hers banging up stairs so they checked and no one was there so they checked the attic and once he got up there he saw his daughter and she recognized him right as he came in . they were so happy. They set everyone free he went home and hid his daughter to surprise his wife he waited and waited but she wouldn't come.

mabey she was already home he looked up stairs to see if she was sleeping

she wasn't there so he called the police and they found her and caught the bad guy or should i say his old wife she didn't die after all she was alive all this time and he talked to her and she was mad at him for not wanting a baby. his old wife was put in jail and they were ok . The other night they went to sleep and early in the morning he heard a door slam. oh great he murmured to himself as he called the police…

THE END