tristans peterson's writing 

Name: Tristan Peterson

Mrs. Riggs

Period: 1

Date: 9/4/15

Crack!

“Awww, look at him he is so cute! Mom, the griffins are hatched! I will name him Ssam.”

Jack jumped out of his tree house.,

“Tthey're hatched, they're hatched!” he yelled running around his village. WAM!

“Ouch who are you?” says jack’’

“Ii'm Ppeater, who are you?”

“I’m jack. Hhere, Ii will help you up. Cc'mon, grab my hand Ii won’t bite. Hey do you want to ride on a griffin it will be fun.”

Fwoosh woh slow down you're going to aaahhhhh help. I got you i will just flip a u turn pull over immediately. Son you were under age driving. Sorry officer.You also fliped a u turn on a griffin you are going to jail bub.Mean while in peters head ,ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, there is a boy falling from the sky ,hey you can we borrow your blanket. yea why no time everybody grab a end and pull tight , i think we got him. BLAM ouch what gives ma'am said peter.

As the years went by Ppeter and Jjack became friends then when they got older happiness was gone peter moved to the usa and jack was a noble knight kicking serious butt Hhe hadwas just finished kissing the dragon good night, he cut its head clean off he took its horns and wings, he went home and went to bed and soon he was fast asleep ………...

“HELP me someone, please,” he woke up, not realizing he is in pjs, grabbed his sword and went to see what was wrong. ,hHe walked around the village then he saw in the fog a shadow and it was the princess jack ran over but the kidnapper disappeared jack ran to his treehouse and went to sleep he had a long day ahead of him. He woke up the next morning and saw a weird book sitting on the ground it wasn't a book it was a map .It was to find the princess

He packed up to go find her he got his stuff and got on sam go sam go off they went. he traveled for nights and days. He fell asleep for a few minutes when he woke he saw that he was standing right next to a sleeping cyclops he saw something glimmering the cave. He walked in and the cyclops woke oh crud he said to himself he reached down to get his sword it wasn't there so he pointed out his hand and nothing happend then the cyclops had him in his hand he pointed his hand out once more fire spewed out then he beat the crud out of the cyclops.then he heard a familiar sound he saw it was peter. They went to get on sam but he wasn't there they couldn't find him they got on peters griffin named jim and went off to find him. They saw something flying towards him they thought it was sam they flew closer and it was a pterodactyl they ran for their lives and they saw sam he was on a tree .Jack jumped off the griffin and landed on him. Sam flew away from the pterodactyl hopefully they won't find us says jack.. so where are we going jack says. to save the princess says jack. and they were off .

they were almost there by the next hour they arrived at a dark cave it was full of gold they saw a big bird cage for she was trapped in it they tried to open it but it wouldn't budge . soon they fell asleep trying to open the cage they woke with a singe of fire in their butts ouch why did you do that? to wake you up who was that they turned around and there was a dragon it was what kidnapped her. let the princess go says jack the dragon said if he went back to the cyclops cave and bring him back the sword with a dragon's egg in the bottom jack had used it to kill the cyclops jack told the dragon the story about the cyclops and the sword. he gave the dragon the sword and out hatched a baby dragon out of the handle and they flew back in the dark peter was talking to jack how did you defeat the cyclops ? he picked me up and i shot fire at him .you can do that? i guess

later that night they heard a weird sound they woke and nothing was there then there was a giant jack pointed his hand balm a big fist came out of his hand and slapped the giant silly he traveled for days then weeks then he finally arrived with the princess they congratulated them jack told the king about his power the king opened up his shirt and saw the scar of duse. it is him the king said. they through a big party for jack and he kissed the princess.